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Hello Saphira! Thankyou for your advice. But I only made the definition in one part, below the definition is a different discussion. Thankyou! | Hello Saphira! Thankyou for your advice. But I only made the definition in one part, below the definition is a different discussion. Thankyou! | ||
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| + | == Feedback == | ||
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| + | The main problem of your draft are these: | ||
| + | # formatting; please follow the rules already outlined. Example: Your bullet lists all start with the placeholder text "Bulleted list item", that is nonsensical. | ||
| + | # You do not cite in-text where you quoted / took which information from. Furthermore, you are using a reference from computer technology in your references. This is linguistics. | ||
| + | # The draft is still very superficial. It does not really explain things or link to explanations. You chose a very difficult topic. | ||
| + | --[[User:Wohlgemuth|wohlgemuth]] ([[User talk:Wohlgemuth|talk]]) 02:40, 15 June 2024 (UTC) | ||
Revision as of 02:40, 15 June 2024
Hello Pauline! Thankyou for the interesting article, I think its good if you can make the definition section to one part, there is no need for two parts so as not to be confused to read.
Hello Saphira! Thankyou for your advice. But I only made the definition in one part, below the definition is a different discussion. Thankyou!
Feedback
The main problem of your draft are these:
- formatting; please follow the rules already outlined. Example: Your bullet lists all start with the placeholder text "Bulleted list item", that is nonsensical.
- You do not cite in-text where you quoted / took which information from. Furthermore, you are using a reference from computer technology in your references. This is linguistics.
- The draft is still very superficial. It does not really explain things or link to explanations. You chose a very difficult topic.
--wohlgemuth (talk) 02:40, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
